Black Poetry : navy blue

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Mar 17, 2004.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my dining room is now navy blue
    it so goes against
    my light colored ways
    my color scheme perfection
    my green edged relaxation

    had a vision of sheer colorless
    panel curtains
    letting in all sunrays
    i'm in such anticipation of spring
    we stood there and debated

    you said the navy blue had a royal hue
    and then i knew
    you just really wanted the blue
    and you were paying for it too
    so now i've moved my pictures onto different walls
    listened to my senses
    how'd i get to DARK DARK BLUE
    and spring is almost here too!

    but you know what we'll do?
    we'll let the sun light through
    and i love you
    so i will make it work too
    navy blue in april
    okay...we'll move gimme dat gum over here
    it has blue in it
    and we'll move the statue of the beggar over there
    it's mahogany, therefore it's too dark
    and i know you've got this royalty thing happening my king
    my life is full of comprimise anyway
    oh...and...did you notice
    when i slipped the natural colored curtains into the cart also?
    cause i'm waiting for the first 80 degree day
    when i can say...oh, i'm burning up! it's too hot for this navy blue!
    and while we're at it
    let's change that area rug too!
    your navy royal blue blue days are limited
    but i will enjoy them with you
    while they last
    and when i switch them over in late june
    i will bring them back in late september
    a much better time for you to reign
    and a much better time
    for me to feel sane
    but in the meantime
    i'll have navy blue in april
    i look at you with affection
    but shake my head laughing
    et tu brute
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is off the hook...i love the visuals in this..flow on...
    :heart:
    -story
     
  3. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you the story for reading my writing and replying....i sure wish this weather would BREAK!
     
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    That's what I'm talkin' bout...

    Loving 2 love, so U compromise, like moon & sun.

    Liked how U slipped U into the cart, smoove.

    Very nice.
     
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    Give and take, liked the vibe, and yes, spring would be nice, but here comes another snowstorm....
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    nice the blue didn't really give you the blues
    like the picture
    and the wisdom coming through
    for a redlady
    you really understand the blue
     
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    wow
    wonderful poem sister
    loving how you vision the hue
    this a
    wonderful
    meaningful
    scribes
    of sharing
    and caring
    got me smiling
    in your flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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