Khasm13 : nautilus...

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  1. Khasm13

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    dark blue liquid waves crash so hard against my shore
    forming white foam
    the waves are banging me so hard...i must submerse my dome
    da deep freezing waters i call home
    deeper then davey jones locker
    exploring underwater chasms are done proper
    my inquiries propel me to new uncharted depths
    schools of sea serpants hiss as darkness is whelped
    i am the nautilus
    i shine my bright light...unaware creatures get caught in this
    path of exploration...anglers try to shine light back
    but know not what they are facing
    i go deeper then the bottom feeders
    deeper then the belly bleeders
    and the blood suckers
    moving slugish in the cold waters like overweight truckers
    so much to see
    underneath da deep azure sea
    going inside the caverns of long dead monsters
    every 10 seconds yields new encounters
    big eyes seem to follow me around
    as i travel deeper
    and deeper and deeper
    i am the nautilus...the peeper
    the ingenuity leaper
    you cannot stop my progress
    unless
    you stop my soul...
    and that something that'll never be in your control...
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm

    I understood ery word!....and another great piece khasm :wink:
    ~Nita~
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love the creativity and double meanings in this flow, Khasm. Peace.
     
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    i like this alot...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyte and smooveeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    We know ya can't be stopped, keep flowing like you do, and always will.
     
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    love it
    u have out done
    ya self this time
    tight drop
    lovin dis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    and yet deeper still..
    all that imagery...
    down in the depths..
    keep flowing and sailing and moving inside and out..
    very nice khasm...very...
     
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    word...good lookin fam
    ya'll make a brotha feel good with such kind wordz...:)
    one love
    khasm
     
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    ;)

    And you make us feel good with your khasmatic words....lol
    and we luv you brutha...so keep um floE'n :spinstar:
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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