Black Poetry : Nature's Song

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  1. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mystery evolves
    blocked moonlight
    And settling fog…
    Crickets,
    Rain frogs &
    Unidentifiable things
    Sing… setting the mood
    Creating an exotic prelude…

    We pull off clothes
    Like skin of passion fruit
    Admiring each other’s birthday suits
    The pursuit…
    Of cranberries
    Set within sweet honey dew melons
    Tasting
    Touching
    Sucking
    Pulling
    So much, I’m on the brink of yelling…

    Again
    the pursuit…
    Using his tongue
    I come undone
    Began to speak unknown tongues I never learned
    Sounds of pleasure fill my lungs…

    Nature rises
    Comes inside
    Raw, unprocessed
    To caress soft flesh
    W/n my peach
    Magic is worked w/ his zucchini
    Like Houdini…

    Romancing as we partake in nature’s dance…
    I reach a point of no return
    As my body yearns
    For the ecstasy
    Pouring over me
    Like warm summer rain…

    With each moan & groan
    new elements we add to the song
    Sexing
    on & on & on & on
    In between sheets
    Our sounds combine
    as climax climbs
    to nature’s song...

    peace
     
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    Shango Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nadia I like this piece.I like a poem that can move the inside of me.
     
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    ahhhh yes...
    nature and love,
    nature and love,
    nature IS love,
    nature is God given
    God is love.

    I love the beauty of nature and love-making.

    Beautiful piece NB.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed this was very moving and well posed twin !
    flow on sistah ......
     
  5. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey... so glad y'all felt the rhythm of nature's song... thankx for the read :)...

    peace
     
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    i liked your creativeness with this piece
    houdini huh?...lol
    peace
    khasm
     
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    wow..this is beautiful, words as a paint brush..i like it
    Peace
     
  8. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm13... glad ya dig the creativity... yeah... like Houdini :)

    Bluewater... steady trying to paint masterpieces!!!

    thankx for the read... and hollering @ a sistah...

    peace
     
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    this was wonderful Vivid images and awesome word play!!!!
    Keep flowing.....

    AqueenPassing

    :wave:
     
  10. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aqueenpassing...

    thankx for the read... glad ya liked it :)...

    peace
     
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