Black Poetry : Nature

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Sep 1, 2002.

  1. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Roaring thunder
    Snapping lightening
    Flailing tree branches
    Howling wind

    The sounds of Nature
    in full force
    in pandemonium
    in strength
    in Full Control
     
  2. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These few words actually have so much meaning in them..there is so much power in nature...it is as gentle as it is as powerful as its maker..God!!.....beautiful and graphic piece...

    lo'
     
  3. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the read Mkhaya lo' and your kind words. I am in awe everyday of God's wonders. Just happen to wake up to a very brief storm yesterday. Hoping at some point to capture the gentleness of nature in a piece too.
     
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    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this!!!!!
     
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    short but powerful...gone one! I was feeling it.
     
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    charged with power!!
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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