Black Poetry : Natural HIGH

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Mar 24, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pardon me brotha
    but the abstracts of my consciousness
    move in thick dark circles while MAXWELL
    forms meanderings in my close - background

    A silver trail mixes forming a line
    that further pervades the connection
    leading to the perception
    Can I per-suade you with my lips and tongue
    Are you that attentive, responsive or lax?

    Can you see what I see, know what I know...
    Fact, ficition or reality
    It's all the same
    In the confines of these fingertips relating to
    this ell

    I am still seeking
    I wonder if the blue I see is the same thang you
    see?
    Sitting here looking at you -
    I wonder if you're vibing me
    Feeling this deep honey coated stare/glare
    or the rhythm I created and have hidden just on
    the other side of my vocal chords
    I wonder if my words are attracting you/
    relaxing you/ or have no affect at all
    I wonder if you even felt me
    brushed up against me in a thought,
    insight, or varied friendly and/or
    intellectual conversation - exchanging
    I wonder if you see me as a soul survivor
    or antagonizer - it's all relatively -relative

    Wondering leads to words
    which are all pro-rated, procreated, and
    perpetuated by a connection that you & I
    have yet to uncover

    Words lead to responses
    Your response is what I am waiting for
    Your blue notes harmonizing unfamiliar melodies
    in my ear
    your angles creating a mosaic for my eyes to view
    ...you move in
    and out...
    of my continuum in short induced puffs
    I hold you between my forefinger and thumb
    A "get lifted" spirit comes over me
    Youhavebecomeonewithmy ess-ence and I
    re-le-ase you, as I release myself

    I get a natural high through our daily interaction
    and with just a few tokes, I am satisfied
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SNAPS... SNAPS... & MO' SNAPS!!! (LOL)

    n2...
    my passionately poetic sistah!!
    ohhhh yessss! dis hea is a tyght joint
    (no pun intended... ;) )

    this:

    HELL YEAH!!... write the words poetess...

    MuchLove...
    Sunshyne
     
  3. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes! lovin it u sound like $RICH$ in his
    picture storm story gurl! tell it all...
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA~

    Dr. GA - as I call you!
    My "sista in scribe"
    Hey girl, thanks for taking the tyme to read ME! I'm glad you stopped by for the read...& to *Get N2urSoul, and thanks for articulating which areas of the scribe you like.

    I'll be watchin' out for your next piece myself...
    We'll holla soon.
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    honeyluv~

    Glad you also liked this piece!

    Gracias!
     
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    tell him Sis
    let him know!

    very nice flow

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee~

    Thanx for stopping by
    and checkin' out this scribe
    I happy to know you liked
    the flow...~
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Playing the bongos for you on this one....This was tight!!!!
     
  9. Street So'ja

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    feelin' ya all the way hea

    yes yes you've hit it on the head hea
     
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    Words to be reckoned with

    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    :lol: :lol: :lol:

    :martian:


    we all lovedid dis!

    sister you know you have skills deeper than any black hole I've read about!!! What did I say about Nikki G?

    :D
     
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