Black Poetry : Natural High

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Mar 9, 2004.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I cry for you
    Do you think of me?

    I lie in the middle of this empty bed
    Imagining your body contour next to my shadow
    I picture your face and see a mirror image of me in your eyes
    Your sweet breath traces my neck
    Your hands love my skin
    We laugh at this high we share for each other

    And I miss this

    I cried for you
    Did you think of me?
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heyyyyyy sista this is OF DA HOOK!!! i loved it, *whew* keep um comin
     
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    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply beautiful

    This is a beautiful piece...a piece that makes you wanna cry...loved it!


     
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    I felt this piece, missing so much of someone, emotively posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep drop feelin it too
    flow on speak
     
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    likes this
    felt it
    nice flow sista
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    i can envision your scene from your words...
    my emotions standin on end.

    one love
    /antar
     
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    Showing you love

    Your poem was nice and sweet.
     
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