Quiet Poetry Lounge : Natural Habitat

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 16, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coming to me as you do
    inhaling the cool crisp air
    I can't see you, this is true
    Yet my third eye knows you're there
    doves and cardinals circle over head
    rainbows of butterflies do too
    red and white feathers drift down to the bed
    monarchs wings kiss my cheek for you
    A cool breeze stirs under floral sheets
    stirring the lilac petals placed by my mind
    As the wind becomes more brisk, my spirit
    is sent on yet another encounter of the blissful kind
    The droplets on my face
    indicate that a shower has taken place
    as your love rains down on my soul
    As the sky clears
    and the moon appears
    My vision takes a moonlight stroll
    as my eyes make a wish upon
    all the stars within them
    I sigh, as another interlude ends
    with my thoughts wrapped up in him
    blanketed
    within our own natural habitat
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very nicely done sista and warm
    as it cascade in tyte write watz
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful, sister. You took me away with this one.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you can feel the warmness within this flow, thank you brotha Rich.
    Thank you gempis for letting me know this took you on a trek, appreciated.
     
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    Girl.........

    Now

    You...know

    that you dropped this with every flame that lashes from that Reservoir of passion
    overflowing within you

    Lava..."Beautifully...Serene" Lava.... :hot:
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage, I cannot begin to thank you for the luv and support you give. You know how it is sis. :) My extreme thanks.
     
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    Simply lovely...

    Such vivid imagery :luv: !!!
    Thank you Sistah Watz
    for sharing this metaphysically
    fueled journey with us

    Much...
    Peace & Love,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Akilah, for letting me know that you enjoyed this journey of words. Appreciated.
     
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