Black Poetry : Natural Disaster

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Sep 10, 2003.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And now...

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    I I I I'm like DAAAAAAAAAMN! This was personal, and profound.

    I, for one, was moved...............One Love Sista
     
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    :jawdrop:

    Oh triniti, this is just off the chain and then some. My goodness. And I can so feel you - both pieces - you don't know, sistah. May the winds of peace continue to blow around you and the waters you immerse in be still. :heart:
     
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    ok.....I've gotta regroup...

    there were so many elements that I loved about this piece...I couldn't even quote a favorite

    But I felt this deeply.......Girl, I know what this feels like, more than I want to
    the imagery was completely off the chain
    and the additional flow of closure...........yeah, that was straight

    Girl...............your skills are immeasurable.....we would have to
    develop a new scale to even chart you!
     
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    girl
    this is tight
     
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    afrostotle...my brotha I'm moved that you were moved (ummm I think i said that right lol) :)
    thank you my brotha...
    thank you

    gempis...thank you but I dont long for the still waters anymore I have found piece among the ripples in the sea :)
    I have learned to survive among the storm and it has made me brighter :) and plus...I gots YOU LOL :)

    angelicsage...gurrrrrl :) thank God i found the essence that is you :) and uhhhhhhh if I have skills than its only cause i got them on loan from the skill maker lol YOU gurl :) lol

    mzblkangel...lol thank u gurl for givin up some of that "blkangel thang" love to lil ol me lol ;)
     
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    most welcome
     
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    :) :toast: lol
    (doin it skyrbe7 style)
     
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    "under the fragments of me
    underneath the wreckage of “we”
    is some remnant of who I used to be"

    Your poetry is always so real. I love that you don't try to get so deep that it confuses people. You just speak from your heart, that's why it's so easy to feel what you write. Said it before and I'll say it many more times it was the :bomb: .
     
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