Black Poetry : Native Desire

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your called native eyes for they make a man feel at home, A resting place for a man like a King on his throne.
    "Home"

    I see your flavor all wraped up in that baby blue Tee, That's labeled on the front "Worlds Finest Chocolate " for all to see.

    But all for me,
    4 today I claim thee!
    ~NATIVELY~

    As my new home, 4 I shall now roam
    Inside every curve of your body and soul,
    My intent?
    Yes you may ask what's my goal.

    But I'd rather show you and not use mere words. 4 to hear a "yes" from your lips would be the greatest thing that I've ever heard.

    "YES" I have nerve!! And I am bold as F**K, Like a super Thug yelling "WHAT, WHAT, WHAT"

    They say that the eyes are the window to the soul, Does that make me a peeping tom waiting to view your whole?

    Or better yet may I just stalk your dreams at night?
    Leaving my Pythonic 6'5" frame in your sight!

    What?
    What did you say?
    Did you say that Im not right? Or that this is too tight?
    I'm sorry but sometimes my hearing just not right.
    "SIKE"

    But Native your eyes have given me sight!
    And now I'm seeing clearly 4 the first time in my life!


    Caramelpython 2003
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop:angel1:
     
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    oh my goodness
    those native eyes
    butta :) smooth
    this is indeed
    a wonderful scribe
    you have compose
    Peace
     
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    Another Dime...I see

    Keep that ink in your pen...flowing
    I'm enjoying the flow..."Natively" :wink:

    Encore...:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful scribe ya pen strollin
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    lips tell lies..eyes release truth.... so look before u speak and look again after!
    TY all forthe love..
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    most welcome...
    i enjoyed the read...Angel
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: angel im gladyou enjoyed this one.
     
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