Black Poetry : ~Narcissus~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A keystyle...


    the night so silent
    turn me into a rose
    i want to be beautiful
    i want...

    a blunt to my
    black lips
    a lost
    street poet
    i speak to myself
    at times
    and curse the fallen stars
    that glides
    through the purple skies

    a rose i wish to be
    i want to be something beautiful
    to those who are able to see
    i want them to smile at me
    **** dead souls
    and the looks of agony
    call me Narcissus...
    turn me into a flower
    from an image of harmony

    turn my body into
    a stem
    my scars wil be
    my thorns
    my roots are my past
    my daughter is my seed
    i will live through when i'm gone

    a flower
    i want to be
    nobody shall
    step on me
    when they see the beauty in me
    Narcissus







    I saw my vision
    Before my BIRTH
    That was when I was a star in the skies
    beforeI became
    My mothers REMORSE

    A flower is all i want to be...
     
  2. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful composition...
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    already told u this was dope

    uppin for ya
     
  4. Destee

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaay Mind~$oul :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Thank you for joining us. Sorry it's taken me so long to welcome you.

    Because you are most welcome here. Your poetry is beautiful.

    Please make yourself at home.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed this write
     
  6. halle24

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    i feel stupid b/c i dont even know what Narcissus means lol
    silly me i guess, but this stood out to me

    i want to be beautiful

    Enjoying your poetry
     
  7. angelicsage

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    wow...

    another gem found...

    by our Poet of the week.... :sand: ​
     
  8. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    POET OF THE WEEK:::: :party: :party: :party: :party: :party: KNOW THAT YOU ARE SHINING SO BRIGHT. :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: EVERYONE AGREES THAT YOU HAVE THAT MAGIC TOUCH. CONTINUE GIVING US SUCH BEAUTY AS THIS.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop poet of the week flow on !!!!
    and stop in at the top and holla at the poet's
     
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    And a flower you will be to all that truly matter, another example of why you are the poet of the week.