Black Poetry : nappy love affair

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, Jan 15, 2002.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brought this one back for a friend...NAPPY HEADS UNITE!!!!

    Caught in your melancholy
    Sweet drops of hesitation
    Holds me close to you
    Can I drink from your cup?

    Rest my head in your lap
    Absorbing the scent of you
    Newness draped in silk
    Keeps my mind slipping

    I inhale your aroma a hint
    Of cinnamon wrapped in kemi
    Wish I could braid your hair
    as you play with my twists

    I adjust so all my wieght don’t
    Rest in your caramel frame
    Girl you know I’m a big guy
    And I wanna be light on you

    There’s something about you
    Keeps me wanting to come rest
    So that I can feel your fingers
    Dance through the lock of my mind

    Can I tell you how you soothe me
    Just being you as I find ways to
    Let go of the day, let go of the pain,
    To make room for the love of you

    I wanna lift my head to tell you
    How much I love you when I move
    You **OUCH** pull tighter so
    That I know this is your time

    I show you my joy as I dance my
    Finger up and down your calves
    Feeling the smoothness and the
    Strength of my nubian queen

    You know I’m trying to behave
    But when I tread to close to the
    Place that only I know about you
    **OUCH** let me know to stop

    I submit to you and you know that’s
    Hard for a brother to do but I can’t
    Help it when you patiently take each
    Lock and twist it with loving care
     
  2. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely yummy...

    I don't know where to begin... this was awesome, on fire, the bomb, all that :hot: .

    I'm jealous of whomever she is... (i can twist too )
     
  3. Danilyn

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    I'm Lovin This!!!!

    Makes me wanna get my hair braided!!!
    Tyte scribe, D!:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mannnnn!! Dnommo

    lovin dis nappy flow wit a head of glow
    man u scribe a masterpiece of sweet twist
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsBerry,

    please don't be jealous...i have no one to twist ma hair (i get it done at the shop)...this was jes a thought of things to come... :D
    (taking applications)

    Danilyn, getting your hair twisted is about as intimate as you can get...nothing like the gentle fingers of your significant other working through ya hair...

    for the both of you...i appreciate the read...
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll make you a deal

    you braid mine and I'll twist yours. My NAPPY HEAD :heart: all this here. ummmmm "delicious classic"




    One
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!!

    :lol:
    she's going to have to cuff you up next time yo

    this piece is tyte!!
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorb....NAPPY HEADS UNITE!!!! FREE DEM!!!! FREE DEM HEADS!!!!

    no doubt...i'll braid and you twist...i promise to keep my hands to myself if you promise the same (you know i was gonna go there :wink: )

    thanks for the read

    j'hiah, sometimes when you are in certain places the mind tends to wander...nothing like a little playing to turn up the heat in the room...

    thank you both for the read...
     
  9. Heartbeat

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    Beautiful Poet all the way around.

    BE
     
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    DON'T HAVE BRAIDS, BUT WILL SOMEONE RUB MY HEAD?
    I HOPE!:)
    NICE PIECE POET.:toast:
     
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