Quiet Poetry Lounge : Nana

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, Oct 18, 2003.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You left before i could say
    Good bye
    I love you
    I admire you
    Thank you
    You are
    the strongest woman i know

    It hurt so bad
    It ripped my heart out
    You were gone

    Now
    I live with
    all these emotions
    broken
    hurtin'
    grievin'

    For what its worth,
    Goodbye, I love you, I admire you, Thank you.

    I miss you



    :heart:
     
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    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know your pain...

    Keep her in your heart, the love never dies...:)
     
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    the love and memeories will always be there...
    i like this flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hold on the the beauty of memories
    savor them in nana will always be near
    caressing u .....well felt
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am really feelin this one. Beautifully posed and scribed!
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys. just had to let some of it out. the memories will last forever.
     
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    very nice
     
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    Bless,
    This was extactly how i felt when my Nana passed. BUt keep her legacy alive, know herstory and be true to your emotions. Remember the goodness and lessons she conveyed to you and celebrate the many ways she's influenced and inspired other and thank God for allow the opportunity for you be become one of those she inspired. Bless.
     
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