Black Poetry : Nameless

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by krazelyricks, Dec 26, 2004.

  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bye:

    About a year ago
    I don't know
    It could have been mo'
    I met you
    and my heart was attracted to you
    Gave you my story from top to bottom , you know about everything that I've been through
    Now suddenly, I just ain't feelin' you
    That part of me, it must have flew
    I gave you a part of me, and you encouraged me
    Now suddenly,
    I feel as if you don't even WANT to know me
    I try to confront you on stuff and you push me to the side
    All I want to know is why
    I thought I
    meant something to you
    Well now in the present, heartache is now due
    Well, roo-roo to you
    For faking like you cared
    When you really was nothing more than everyone else whose aquaintence I've shared
    A liar, cheater, and down right back stabber
    I've now realized that I'm just destined for this
    Everything that I've ever been drawn to has been taken away just like this
    I guess no one will ever truly have a heart
    for this fallen star
    The only thing I can say that you said that I still do is "look up"
    But I never really understood what I was looking up for
    Am I looking up to see smog and polluted air
    Or am I looking up for much more, oh **** it really doesn't matter
    I'm much better
    Without you, whether
    You believe me or not, I've realized who matters
    MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    not you
    not them
    It's all about me!!!
    You see, when I met you
    I was down on rough times
    Just had got out juvenile and I was just looking for someone to listen to my rhymes
    You did that for me, with smiles (fake ones but they were still smiles)
    Now, I just sit back and watch wondering if this nameless individual will ever know what they meant to me
    What they actually did for me
    And how they mattered to me
    It's over now, I guess I'll just have to sit and wonder
    Becuz a fallen star doesn't need more headache to make them fall more
    You front in front of people like you've just been helping me through so much
    Like you've really cared and always kept in touch
    Well excuse me, I must have missed something which
    I just didn't see
    Did that part get passed me
    Sorry,
    I don't mean to be a bother but I just wanted to let this nameless individual know just how they've helped me
    And hurt me
    But at the same time helped rejuvenate me
    This is foxi
    breaking down
    To become the official krazelyricks
    To form a new rhetoric
    That part of my life, the real past that I've showed will never be opened again
    This is a new lady and a new friend
    somebody who will never open up to this nameless individual again
    Goodbye nameless individual, I mean old friend


    :bye:
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In most relationships...we learn or we wither.
    Gather up the total of this relationship, hold fast to what was learned, and swifty blow the rest away...and start building. Start with your first and last true love..."You", ...
    ...and all that follows that, is a reflection of "You"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this meaningful script of love and burn
    i feel you here flow on and kiss nameless
     
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    Aw, baby girl - I'm feelin this more than you know. If I could hug ya right now I would, believe that.

    You never know what purpose someone is going to fill in your life. And when you think one thing, the other's gonna happen (which is why expectations are ultimately useless). Once you get past the pain part of this, then the best thing to do is accept with gratefulness the lessons that person taught you and the things you learned from the experience. Everyone is your teacher, no matter their age, sex, race, etc. Get past the pain and the anger and bless the person - send them love with all your heart. Release and love sets the energy free. Otherwise it turns into negativity, which becomes trapped inside you.

    Much love and many blessings, girl. And never say never.
     
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    yes in your journey you have indeed found out who matters
    wonderful flow dear poet
     
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    Hugs to you foxi. So much to experience in life, to learn from....It's said that experience is the best teacher, and it can be so long as we don't keep making the same mistakes. You will find the star that doesn't make you keep falling...that was a great line by the way. I hear you, and feel you, keep flowing lil sis.
     
  7. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all so much for your kind words. It's funny because when I wrote this I was sad but now I just realized I needed to get it off my chest, if only for a little while. I'm happy now because your kind words made me feel this way. Thanks again family. :rolling:
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

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    we learn we grow we strive you just are beginning to bloom my sister
    this was a release and it was posed well.....Angel
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

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    wonderful flow...
     
  10. Awriter'ssoul

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    Wow!
    That's all I can say.
     
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