Black Poetry : Nakedness

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  1. 4evaLuvMe

    4evaLuvMe New Member MEMBER

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    I go in the world fully clothed
    My marks are covered, the marks from the past and present
    My individualities and my identities are concealed in earth's sheep clothing
    But when I stand in front of you naked, you see all that
    You feel my pain and joy
    Life isn't a lie anymore
    You know every mark by heart
    You know me well
    But when it's all done, I put back on my clothes and leave
    I leave covered fully in fake clothes
    Looking for someone to undress me again
    To feel me again
    To satisfy my nakedness
    that I cover when I go out into this world
     
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    Hey 4evaLuvMe, :wave:

    WELCOME to the family!! :)

    This is quite an impressive first post!! Very deep and emotional. I like it very much!!

    Look forward to reading more from you!!

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome the sweet scribe u vibe in words
    dis was tyte flowin happy u join us poetically:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    hey 4evaLuvMe
    welcome :wave:
    very deep flow
    feeling it
    wonderful
    looking forward to
    more
    Peace
     
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    feeling this...very nice poet
     
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    welcome gurl, u are so going to like ur stay here
     
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    Thank you for showing me love here. I will definitely post more of my poetry.
     
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    Deep flow........yes! we wear the masks.........Welcome 4evaluvme!
     
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    This was poignant in its open-ness yet also had a tinge of sadness.

    Interesting concept.









    And :birthday:
     
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