Black Poetry : Naked thoughts

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Laying exposed
    naked under da starz
    awaiting her in vision
    as she comes in da
    mist covering me in
    depth of her warmth
    sweet n' wet kisses
    we partake

    My heart become deeply
    overwhelmed with this
    hot lustful desire of beauty
    drippin in sweat of sunshine
    thinking of her and the sway
    my mind drift into a zone
    as my love start to roam
    my destiny become a zone
    i taste da essence of her

    driving me deeper into
    this hot fantasy of exotic
    passion i can't return back
    for my desires cascading
    lusting to touch
    lone to hold my body cry out
    in this hunger uncontrollable
    so fierce and soulful

    I see her face in my mind
    i taste the fruits of her
    golden pond and felt da
    passion of extreme love
    i lay here naked and free
    where skin touch skin
    hand n' hand
    tears run the ocean floor
    from this erotic feeling
    my body yearns
    my emotions burns
    i need to be released .....
    :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1:

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    this was :great: ...you work this one to a "T"
    loving this vibe....oh yeah...
    flow on...coz i be back :wink:

    Angel
     
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    most humble thankz sista Angel i feel the new wave u know
     
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    well as smooth as this was the new wave fits you....lovely flow
     
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    And release you did.....my brotha this was pure liquid passion flowing onto the page.
     
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    thankz sista Watz from my nakedness
     
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    QQ......:)
     
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    well you sure released it in this poem...


    as we visiolize it...




    i was looking for a smily that fitted with the titel....


    nakedness....


    i,m sorry but i came up with this one...





    :blush:












    i guess we lady,s stood there naked to after reading this poem,......





    beautifull...


    but if you dont mind ...i put them back on now ...
    i still have to walk trough the cafe..



    and than go upstairs..









    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    lol......u know me .
     
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    thankz sista libertylady wow i wish i was able to see
    all the ladies naked ....lol y'all too much
     
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