Black Poetry : NAKED LOVE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cursed heart, Jan 27, 2006.

  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NAKED LOVE



    Woke up early that day
    I saw the sun shining down on my bed
    It brought attention to this emptiness in my heart
    I couldn’t move because his hair follicles left on the pillow began to turn gray
    Love is old but my heart hasn’t aged

    **** the day after!

    Paralyzed by the tears that choke my soul
    Reaching for a cigarette and I don’t even smoke
    I turned the radio on and they’re playing Murder she Wrote

    **** the day after!

    Reminiscing of photographs that made me laugh
    The phone rings and it’s Frankie telling me loves gonna last
    Hire my future, and fire my past
    Body balling from my emotions searching for a home

    It begins to rain
    His scent is rinsed from my thighs
    His physique from my eyes
    Love from my mind
    I hear a voice from my souls choice
    Telling me wake up baby ,it was all a dream.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the naked truth surrounded you... You certainly have a way with vivid imagery poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was str8 up nudity
    tyte flow
     
  4. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :sand: Thank you for the love watzinaname:sand:
    Rich you are a great support system boo:sand:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this some kind of dream flow on sista gurl!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    :great: good thing it was only a dream. Nice flow sis!
     
  7. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sistah nevar and sonnee01:kiss1:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was a deep piece Sister Poet
    Much Love on this drop
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :rolling: Thank you brother tantrum!
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!!!
    That was some dream u had.
     
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