Black Poetry : Naked in the Night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Mar 18, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A slow undress revealing sensuous regard
    Feeling like I want you in so many delectable ways
    Hot flashes reserved like a menopausal moment
    Ignites the flames of eroticism and love in me for you

    Shadowed by the darkness yet illuminated by the light
    Warmest glows from a fire’s long kept secret
    Cascade brilliantly on our unguarded bodies
    Perpetuating a perfect night to bask in mutual awe

    Soft converging of lips works its’ seductiveness
    Rivers of excitement flow deeply within us causing a shiver
    Our naked bodies appear cold; yet are warmed by each caress
    Wrapped in ourselves to unveil our true nature

    A kiss I carefully offer to place wherever your heart desires
    Methodically we dance to the sound of our own silent moans
    My manhood swells as does my heart with every passing second
    Entranced at how sensual and beautiful your nudeness is to me

    The night grows warmer with the blowing of the fire’s breath
    We lay close together to explore far more than we ever dreamed
    Bared minds and essences continue to stimulate us
    Turning our bodies into temples in which to be worshipped

    Gently I soothe the ache of your wanting to join with me
    Our sensuality locked up as if in chains of heated passion
    Working together in unison—our lovemaking is slow yet deliberate
    The privacy of your womanhood makes me want you all the more

    The windows of my soul peer into those of your world
    Never have I felt such a deeper meaning of what love means
    With pained but pleasurable expressions; we reach our heights
    An orgasmic epilogue to our being naked in the night...
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Somebody call the Fire Department -- PLEASE

    GQ~

    Is there a medic in da house?! I think I just hit a "flatline" reading this - my auricle jumped out of my shell!!

    I have just been deep fried in the slow cooker! You do it; and do it well, very very well indeed!!

    This one is ExP-LOsIve -
    What else is a lady left to say....
    'cept -(when you coming over?)
    keep smiling - you wear it well!
     
  3. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah

    this is sensuality at its best! thank you!


    B
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    yes GQ

    very nice flow

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. Juicylv4u2

    Juicylv4u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hummmm...

    Very beautifully expressed with such passion :)
     
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    HOLD IT DOWN BLAKMAN, HOLD IT DOWN!!! As usual this is a tight piece. Bro you gone have someone pass out in this here piece.

    blak
     
  7. Street So'ja

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    privacy of your womanhood

    yo, GQ you have seen this TV show called blind date? my the need to get a brotha like you up on there and let you show them has it's done

    Man you got a gift

    i'm feeling ya work i don't think i've read any of your work that has disappointed me yet

    keep it up no pun intended of course
     
  8. nubianlover

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    dont stop !

    beautiful flow of love thats full of passion
    do yo stuff GQ .........man on the beat
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet sound of night naked
    summer tyme fun running wit passion
     
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    Great one to bring back Rich. Quite an erotic wave, as the passion flows naked in the nite. Wow....
     
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