Black Poetry : naked i stand

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  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...inspired...
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    naked i stand
    before you...
    reaching for the intangible
    to cover my skin
    which beckons thee

    my head bowed
    low...as if to hide
    from your loving
    eyes that view
    my hands clasping
    my breast...
    i don't want you see
    the enticing parts of me...

    breathing deeply
    i feel your warm breathe
    as you approach me...
    you don't touch me
    yet i feel you
    caressing my whole
    body...
    your spirit...
    it wants to enter me...

    i inhale your spirit
    as it engulfs
    my nakedness
    the pleasure
    begins to awaken...
    no, inflames my womanhood
    as i release my breast
    and raise my head
    then moan...
    i am consumed by
    the inferno you fuel...

    before you...
    naked i stand

    MsDLite © 04.01
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D LIGHT OUT OF SIGHT WITH THIS GIRL WANNA BE IN YOUR WORLD READ THIS SEVERAL TIMES LOVING THIS HERE
     
  3. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful *sniff* just beautiful. *sigh*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DeLiteFULLY BEAUTIFUL
    BABY I LOVE THIS
    IN THE BEAUTY OF U I STAND
    BEFORE U WITH MY EYES GLAZED
    AND I SAY IN WHISPERS OOOOOOOOOOO!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsDelite,

    queen this was marvelous! fantastic!

    one love, blak
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...many thanks...

    ...message within the message...
    this is just a little something while i am still on hiatus...

    MADD...thank you & keep your lyrics flowing--i am still watching!

    diva!! holla atcha big sis, sometime!

    $RICH$...well, you know...!

    blakverb...i am in extreme awe of your work! just wanted you to know...

    because i am...
     
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    MsD sista sista sista speak on
    ya flow is a standing ovation!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    snappin

    with my shades on sis! you KNOW how I feel bout dis!

    Flow nah!

    A
     
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    MsD...

    And the picture couldn't be more beautiful!!!

    Excellent piece!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    as i told wildflower 7,

    i'm only acknowledging some of the best poet(esses)
    w/o having time to read....

    i skimmed and trust
    this is something i'm not trying to miss

    *i shall return*

    j'hiah
    nfinite
    from his serene garden
     
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