Black Poetry : NAIJA-MAN'S MINDS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naija-man, Dec 17, 2003.

  1. naija-man

    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mc's must be dreaming, thinking they can handle me,
    They should open up their eyez and face the reality,
    I'll turn your whole life into one big fatality.
    I Spitt an ill verse,Sick words and twisted verbs,
    My lyrics ever blazin', giving you Fiery curse,
    Thinking the sun hot iz hot, but my heat iz much worse,
    I send leave verbal molten lava dissolving in your nerves,

    My style is so different, It's in it's own class,
    I'll rip your d**m lips off, and make you kiss your d**m
    My verses come all, It's like lyrical abuse,
    many different styles, leaving u confused,

    My flow iz too krazy, you cannot handle this,
    I let you know right now that I'm the verb-vandalist,
    Ulike Missy E,my whole life is a test,
    I pass with fyling colours, beacuse verbally blessed,
    Grab your helmet partner, dis iz lyrical terrorism,
    I give you a shock wosre than antrax in your nervous sytem,

    I hear people talk talking about so much,
    I leave their tongues in twisters,
    they be chattin so much, their voice-box has blisters,

    I way too out of it, I sum-times talk 2 myself,
    People will be wonddering if I'm in good mental health,
    I repress all stress,-
    anger and rage
    Holding it all inside, within in a metal cage
    ©NAIJA-MAN 2003
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i am loving the humor in this drop :)
    just wonderful..
    let the flow
    roll
    Peace
     
  3. UniverSouL

    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like the delivery in this piece. really easy to read. not too much wordplay. stylish in it's own right.

    keep flowing true emcee!

    peace,
    universoulove
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said welcome to the poetic playground
    of lyrical flowz
     
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