Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Mar 14, 2002.
Dreaming of sunshine
Warm in her blanket
Snowflakes fall upon her night
Awww gee thanks BE.... I like the sound of this haiku here...
unfortunately, the truth is... I just got off of work & when I walked out of my office there was 6 inches of snow that was already on the ground & new snowflakes that continued to greet me and escorted me all the way to my car I hadda clean off my SUV while it was warming up and my thoughts were on the additional 3 to 6 inches we are supposed to get before tomorrow!! Uggh!!
(oh, after venting.... I wonder did I tell you thank you for this beautiful haiku???)
man u scribe da beauty of warmth......love dis one
This haiku should warm your heart up a bit. Don't you think Ms. N?
this brings the warm-fuzzies out! beautiful imagery, BE.
Yes, I second Alyce's observation.
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