Black Haiku : N2ur's Snow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Mar 14, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreaming of sunshine
    Warm in her blanket
    Snowflakes fall upon her night

    BE
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww gee thanks BE.... :) I like the sound of this haiku here...

    unfortunately, the truth is... I just got off of work & when I walked out of my office there was 6 inches of snow that was already on the ground & new snowflakes that continued to greet me and escorted me all the way to my car :lol: I hadda clean off my SUV while it was warming up and my thoughts were on the additional 3 to 6 inches we are supposed to get before tomorrow!! :eeek: Uggh!!

    :D

    (oh, after venting.... I wonder did I tell you thank you for this beautiful haiku???) :lol:

    N2
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u scribe da beauty of warmth......love dis one
     
  4. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This haiku should warm your heart up a bit. Don't you think Ms. N?
     
  5. alyce

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    this brings the warm-fuzzies out! beautiful imagery, BE.
    thank you

    a
     
  6. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I second Alyce's observation.
     
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