Black Poetry : N2 - Untitled (need help with a title family)

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Silent fingers gliding across
    the edge of a reprinted picture
    and up her satin dress
    as soft lipstick touches
    Cover her neck like
    brutal hands from
    forgetful ex-boyfriends
    and as gin tasting
    index fingers hook the
    garment of unlocked guilt
    leaving open the unfulfilled
    potential of
    egg and bacon afternoons
    she feels the
    remains of the first kiss
    moving up the back of her
    right leg and in her
    somewhat sober soul
    letting out the sounds
    hidden behind doors
    and inside short dresses
    while erasing the
    blackened memory of
    long sleeved shirts
    and tylenol mornings




    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Requesting Help ~

    I'd love it if someone could help a sistah out with a possible title to this piece.... Tell me what you think.... to me it's screaming.... "Help, in need of a title" :lol:
     
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    i have no idea

    but i came up wit

    THE MORNING HOOKER HANGOVE

    yo N2

    i don't know

    MERRYGO ROUND ROLLOVER

    ????????????
    HELP

    DSS
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DSSNY

    .......so'ja, you're a mess :lol: well, even if you don't know what a title could be, you still get an "A" for the effort! :lol:

    Thanks for readin' this piece... :)

    N2
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    If I'm reading this correctly I would call this piece, "Making Do",
    "A Soul That Has Decided To Settle", "Until Mr. Right", "Compromise", "Lost AND Found". I don't know this is deep if I am correct on the subject matter this is what I'd name it. The piece is deep, sad. I've seen this person.

    blak
     
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    N2

    this is a whole life story....a moment in time...and a few hours...of someone's life all at once...

    I love the way you tell a story and the many pictures that flash through the my mind when I read what you have to say..

    the words that came to mind when I read this were..
    "Touch me in the morning"

    K
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    You provide some insightful titles here.... they must be taken into consideration.... :D

    Thank you boo ~


    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey sistah frynd.... thank you for the assistance on a title. I appreciate it ...


    N2
     
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    I have no idea ma... I'm really bad with titles! lol
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey brotha......tha's not a problem, I'll just say thanx 4 tha read!

    N2
     
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