Black Poetry : N***er In Your Eyes (Brought from critique page)

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  1. ANUK_AUSAR

    ANUK_AUSAR Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N***er In Your Eyes

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    I am a ****** in American eyes
    My wants are not real, but concern's caricatures-

    Animated madness,
    glazed-over with a sweet honey-barbecue sauce
    In a dirty dish doubling as an ashtray
    For my incinerated opportunities
    And the blunt-guts of dismay.

    I m a n***er in American eyes
    My needs are never explained
    So they fade into the sloppy gravy
    f my aforementioned artifical wants and
    Unrealistic scenario A's-
    For which I never plan,
    Except to happen upon them
    In a narcotic stupor:

    You know, between three scratch-offs
    And next week's binge at the MGM
    I figure something's on cover these **** hospital bills
    Because my once-famed alchemical fortuity
    Has taken on a life of its own.

    Able to transmutate white owl, white wine and white hoes
    Into yellow teeth, polka-dotted purple liver
    And red-hot piss
    Crack rock is my Philosopher's Stone.

    I am a n***er in American eyes
    And nature is a cruel broad.

    M chick? Gave me the proudest shade
    So a shade of arrogance covers American eyes
    To the seriousness of they exploitative ways.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head poet this was very nicely done
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I WAS FEELIN THAT MOST DEFINITELY
    I MEAN WE ARE A NUGGA IN AMERICA...AND THAT IS SO TRUE BOUT WUT U SAID, BUT WUT ARE THEY IN OUR EYEZ, BUT IF THE TABLE TURNZ,
    THE WHITE MAN WAS 2 CUM IN LIVE IN AFRICA, HOW WUD WE TREAT DEM
    WILL WE TAKE JOBZ FRUM DEM AND DEY WUD BE SO QUICK 2 CALL US RACES
    AND DEY MITE THINK IN OUR EYEZ DEY ARE C****ER
    AND DEY WILL TRULY FEEL THE WAY WE DO

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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