Black Poetry : ...mysun.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, May 18, 2002.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this morning i saw
    a resplendent orange moon…
    & my mental instantaneous-ly
    caressed amorous thoughts
    of you… mysun…

    & i was driving… silent-ly…
    all the while wondering if
    you know that i flow free-ly
    … creaming… at your ability
    to infiltrate me… soul deep
    then send me reeling/feeling/wanting
    nothing but you… mysun.

    this **** is so intense that i
    don’t know if i’m
    going or coming…
    …cumming or going
    to cum at the thought of
    your tongue
    leaving lingering love licks
    on every unadorned inch
    of my exposed 6-foot
    countenance & get this…
    you haven’t even touched me yet
    (at least not in the physical sense)

    still—

    i’m feeling you like this, mysun.

    mybeautifulblackman
    mybaby
    mymuse
    mylove
    yourmoon is so into you
    …& i like it here.
    so… would you mind if i stay
    in this place
    gent-ly inhabiting your
    upclose&personal space
    ...forever marveling
    at the way your heartbeat
    keeps perfect pitter-pat pace
    …with mine
    & the entire time i’m
    left open w i d e… no longer
    able to hide my desire to…
    …fu*k you

    actual-ly… i’m willing…
    to let you blow on my coffee
    …lie in my coveted bed beside me
    inside me/arriving with me…
    contInUoUS-ly
    …i want to tell you secret things
    & saturate your god-like mentality
    in SouthernSensuality
    …you can even have the extra key
    that unlocks every thing dear to me…

    i am loving you… like that, mysun.

    (admitted-ly, you… got… me.)

    ©SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    otayyy...i know yo butt know that this heyah is tyght, ryght (lol)?!?!? i'm lovin' tha way that this piece, sweet sunshyne, has just flowed from yo pen. i think that it is very well written and a little sexy-sassy (yeah, i said that...lol), as well. keep on scribin', as i continue to enjoy how you do this love poetry thang', ma dear friend. much love....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U BURNING IN FLAMES WIT DIS SPRAY OF SUNSHYNE BEAUTY
    LET THE RAYZ SHYNE THROUGH!!! WOOOOWEEEE.......TYGHT!
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    kl thank you sister dear! i'm glad you enjoyed this
    heah piece/peace... it's one of my favorite from what i
    have decided to call "the beautifulblackman chronicles"...
    that's a working title! :wink: itsallLove, chile!! :heart:

    $$rich$$ there you go again... makin' me smile! :D
    thank you for takin' the time to read&reply!! :heart:
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if this is whats happenin when he hasn't even touched you yet....well ...ummmm...do you think we're ready for whats happenin when he does....or are you gonna keep all the good stuff to yourself:)

    I like this other level of love poetry...

    K
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great piece. Love the use of comparison.
    Beautiful emotive words with a tyte flow.
    Great poem as always Sunshyne.
    *Emma*
     
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    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WWHHOOOAAAA

    Oh I Likes dis one hea!!! Somebody turn tha AC on High, cause this hottie got me HOT!!!:eek:
     
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    anothagudwon SS:
    like the flow uv thangs in this one.
    obvious-ly


    hw
     
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    WOOOWEEEEEE!!!! I can't wait to get to Atlanta and find me a Georgia Peach!!!!! Hey sunshyne care to help me unpack?
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    as always... i appreciate the love.

    kt ...ummm... i'll keep you posted. & i won't leave a
    single detail out! :lol: emma i always smile when i
    read your replies. you make me feel like i'm doin' this ****
    right! :) 007 you are a mess!! (lol) i hope thangz
    cool down for you... real soon! :wink: hi-wa gaboi!
    thanks for takin' the time. 'preciate cha. watcher...
    wow! i must have done somethin' right fa real this time
    for you to leave me a reply!! :tongue: (lol) oh! & if you
    need some help wit dat unpacking... be sure to send me
    a message or somethin'... :D

    itsallLove, chirens!! :heart: