Black Poetry : Mysty Eyed Brown Nose Girl

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t you dare shy away from me.
    Let your eyes shine as bright as the clear blue sea.

    The tears that start to cover your pupil.
    Don’t let them fall…
    Become frugal

    The pain that has pierced your heart…
    All laid upon, stomped on and torn apart.
    Laden and lost…
    Dreams sold at a cost

    Tell me dear child who has hurt your heart
    Did you fall and sprang your knee
    Did someone hold you down and
    Said you could not go to the bathroom to pee

    My poor mysty eyed brown nose girl
    Let me shower you with diamonds and pearls
    Let me take you for the world you must see…
    Help you stand tall and believe in thee.

    And you still hang your head…
    Saying prayers wishing you were dead.
    Has the arrays of sun…turned your soul sullen
    Have you ran from the world like a convicted felon.

    Hiding yourself for all not to see.
    Denying yourself what belongs to thee.
    Reaching out for someone to take away the pain.
    And in return love you did not gain.

    My poor mysty eyed brown nose girl.
    Let me give you the world.
    Make your dreams a reality.
    As your eyes shine bright as the shining sea.
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaneak,

    Nice flow. Welcome to Destee's!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Thank you...I hope i will enjoy it.

    Shaneak
     
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    feeling

    the art hea, nice piece
     
  5. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: feeling

    Thanks....
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight flow! welcome!

    one love,blak
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why thank you...
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    poet Sha i lovedided this piece here

    this is what poetry is all about

    i'm loving your flow

    peace

    DSS
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shane

    nice flow.....



    One
     
  10. Amun-Ra

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    Well!

    Liked dis--sho nuff--it was bright, exuberant and well done--Amun-Ra

    ;)
     
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