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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for the one(s) who co-wrote this chapter


    there was someone I used to know, who traveled far outside her discomfort zone into the outer regions of someplace else ~
    and something new happened to her, though later she would learn the opposite was true...she was happening to something new...

    be that as it may, she'd only planned to stay one day...

    but her soul got happy inside the wonder of that land and new dimensions of sight and sound almost blinded her third eye

    with

    colors so brilliant, even shades she'd never seen, illuminated by the light reflected in the windows of all those dwelling in that place...

    wisdom, knowledge, and understanding were all present... and together they brought truth....

    and love....

    well, she lingered long in the arms of love, opened herself to receive its deep touches and the twins of peace and joy were conceived...

    the labor was hard, yet sweet, but not without much pain,

    and her children grow more beautiful, perfect poetic images of their father...

    no, she hadn't the slightest idea, as she traveled that way, of what she would ultimately find

    but since she's been back, it is clear to all, that experience blew her natural mind...


    alyce, 2001
     
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    Ms. Alyce...youare quite excellent.

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    *snapping*

    your flows always leave me speechless
    i want the book.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    the depth....all i can do is snap!
    K.
     
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    Happening~

    A~
    you've got what it takes!:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmm! the beginning of a new
    this was very nice A.
     
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