Black Poetry : Mystified Love

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tears from your eyes make even an untouchable like me, lip quiver.
    I am you in a more complicated form, the female version of you.
    You do not realize that when I am depressed and you pick me up,
    I cry these nights and wish you had not.

    Kisses from your lips are never not wanted, but sometimes
    Not needed, because you have already blessed
    Me with your sweet words.
    Words that form hands that engrave mine into theirs.

    Lies from your mouth scorn my soul and
    Makes me want to love never again.
    In any shape nor form. However, in a
    Painstaking minute, your arms encase me in
    Your own.

    Tickles from your fingers create an eruption
    Of giggles from my frowning lips.
    Giggles that were held in me for
    An eternity until my poet came along.

    Words from your tongue cuddles
    Me whether you are on the phone
    Or resting your head on my bosom.

    Love from your heart discharges into
    My soul with full blast of overwhelming
    That my knees buckle and cries escape
    My mouth.

    Good byes from your eyes gaze into
    My own and in reflection I reply
    With a tear that now escapes my
    Own eye.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !!! well felt
    good byes from your eyes gaze into
    my own and in reflection i reply
    with a tear that now escapes my
    own eye .......
    this right here took me deep within
    now all i can do is breathe

    a true masterpiece
     
  3. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you RICH again you bless me with your sincere words thanks for feeling me here it means alot until next time I'm waiting for more beautiful flows from you
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I ...man.serentni..I feel you girl! :bites lips: I believe we all have met that special poet!!! :)
     
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    You are a special poet
    yo' darn self!
    keep on flowin' Serenti.
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful

    I am so feeliny you! I really enjoyed this (smile)

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi serenti,

    WOW!! This is a fantastic poem!! I know this feeling!! Thanks for this wonderful piece!!

    ~Sierra~:toast:
     
  8. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Swt T----thanks girl for feelin me on this one and yeah I always feel you on your flows to :)

    skrybe---thank you skrybe you make me smile everyday glad you liked it hope to hear more from u soon :)

    queen---glad you knew were I was coming from on this one and I'm glad you enjoyed it

    Sierra---thanks Sierra girl I'm glad you liked it but as of course I luv all your flows too :)

    and to all ya'll thanks for taking the time out to read me :0

    peace
     
  9. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this hear poem is extremely felt!
    isn't it amazing, when a poem can make you feel such a way!!
     
  10. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah it sho nuff is girl :) lol glad you liked it hope to hear more flows from you soon :)
     
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