Quiet Poetry Lounge : MYSTICAL SUNRISE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Her undying love
    awakening soul
    warmth of caress
    gave birth out of
    the darkness to
    light
    a Mother
    is a blessing
    nutured and bonded
    she will always
    give to thy child
    forth the worthyness
    is yours to make
    her teaching is like
    creation
    without a doubt
    the shadow u see
    is the image of she
    as she is of thee
    like the mystical sunrise
    her love is untouched
    and can never be replaced
    my heart in pure joy
    to think of such a woman
    a Queen a mother whom
    bring forth life to love
    will always treasure
    thy woman and honor
    what a woman go through
    a man could never handle
    what pain she endure
    a man will die
    they are the most honorable
    rare treasures a man could
    ever cross
    wake up bruthas
    Queenz are jewels
    in da mystical sunrise
    she not a hobby
    nor a joy of self acts
    but the half to man
    she offer u more the honey
    more then gold
    no diamond can sparkle like
    her radiant smile
    she is the mystical sunrise
    for man to honor
    to all the MOTHERS in the world
    GOD Bless MYSTICAL wonder ..
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
    :heart: :heart: :spin: :luvv: :luv: :heart: :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nothing like a mothers love indeed
    thank you..loving this wow
    the warmth and peace i get from it....
    you are a TRUE KING OF KINGS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz sistah just opening up the book
    of what a woman worth is to man
    and a love of a mom ........peace unto u
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This had me smilin all the way through, and I felt a warmth on both levels...your words of praise for both moms and women. Loved the way you penned this, gave me an idea of something to write about....
     
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    you are a marvelous man ..there is no end
    to the Love you shower
    of the essence of a woman
    touching my mother soul indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Rich this was so sweet honoring the mothers...
    keep it flowin:wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    happy it help u cross pen and scribe
    thankz wats for feeling what i feel
    about a soul of a woman and mothers

    sistah Bluewater thank u
    a mother soul is the warmth of a child

    sensual......thankz indeed great honors to women & mother's
    cross da nation
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm Brotha Rich, this seemed to wrap itself all around my heart and made me experiece things I can't believe. This is gorgeous.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thankz Dior....................
    a woman worth is far more then da eye can see
    and what da heart feel is only half but to touch mentally
    and taste what she endures is love & honor to a QUEEN
     
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    oh myyyyyyyy
    I am so touched by the beauty of this poem and its poetic flow. $$RICH$$, you are wonderful. Much love, sweetie.
     
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