Black Poetry : <Mystical Lover>

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mystical
    warmness i am
    the breeze dat
    brush ya face
    the tender windz
    of rapture
    mystical
    electrical charge
    to stimulate ya fate
    I am da desires of
    destiny bound the
    sweetest love around
    i am the embrace u feel
    da fire to a soulful thrill
    i am da monarch of
    compassion da dream
    filled affection da sparkle
    in ya eye da one up up
    deep in da sky your cuddle
    of golden peace a romance
    so sweet ready to release
    i am the air u breath
    the vision u see
    i am da mental mystical
    mesmerizer da body hypnotizer
    i am da mystical love from above
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Again, you did a fantastic job on this piece...well done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz sista Queentswana mystically
     
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    when i come
    i'll bring wit me
    a heart & understanding
    something u can't get
    but instill from heart
     
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    ...Indeed YOU are

    Indeed...

    Keep it hot poet...Keep it hot... :smokin:
     
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    Your writing of this poem created a visual in my mind, and a warmth. Very very nice it was heart felt :tweety: .
     
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    thankz sage for the warm visit sista

    thankz securenote....happy u had a vision into my mental to feel da warmth
     
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    Magic man hmmmm
    touch all my dreams and turn them upside down
    i let the magic take me in as you wrap me with that
    sweet magical love...
    this was sweet and i am loving it
    you got a way with words baby
    hmmmmm a magic man oh yeah this is on

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    magical mystical moments
    touched by tyme & love in
    one's heart brings a electrical
    charge of rapture happy u felt
    the embrace of da LOVER>>>>
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich you have a way with word and i have to take you up on a challege as i did with theone