Black Poetry : Mystery Of Thee

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I CAME TO A RIVER
    DOWN BY THE POND
    CROSS OCEAN LINE
    I CAME TO TEN STEPS
    I HIT THE STEP & JUMP
    TO THE SHORE OF HOPE
    AS I WALKED ON!

    THE SUN RISED BRIGHT
    HEAT IN A BLAZE
    IT DIDN'T FAZE ME
    I HAD A JOURNEY
    INSIDE A MISSION
    I SAW THE STREET BEFORE ME
    A PLACE OF MYSTERY LETTERS
    SPELLED TO PASS ON
    I SAW A FRIEND CROSS DA WAY
    I HAD ONE APPLE
    A ROSE
    AND HEART

    I WAS TOLD TO CATCH UP TO
    THE OTHER , SO I RAN
    AS SUN WAS TO SET
    IT WAS 3 OF US
    SO I SPLIT TO BE EQUAL
    I KNEW I WAS BORN 2ND

    I SAW THE OLE HOUSE
    UP THE ROAD IT WAS MISTY BLUE
    I HAD TO CRACK A CODE BEFORE
    ENTERING THE DOOR
    IT WAS LATE GETTING DARK
    SO I STEP UP
    AND WENT 3 RIGHT 2 LEFT 6 RIGHT
    I WAS THE ONLY ONE TO GET IN !!!

    AS THE MYSTERY UNFOLD I FEEL SAFE TWO

    UNTIL NEXT YEAR I'LL BE ONE MORE ADDED:toast:
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich,

    As usual another beautifully written piece!!

    Thanks for sharing this one!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    A good read, mysterious and dark.
     
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    I enjoyed this immensely and the air of mystery. Smooth pieceā€¦
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sierra , 1poet , angelic........Thankz
    as the mystery of thee is a silent secret
    yet told !


    cindy u know ! o'my
    tell me how !???.......................................lol
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the mystery mixed of the curious and unseen waiting to unfold, nice flow RICH Happy B-Day!! :smile:
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes as it unfold the mystery is hard to find
    thank u blueeeeeeeee!!
     
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    humm...i wish this poem could reveal your age that you're so trying to hide :devil:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look deeper it's their add it up ! only clue
    age in the number & letter at the end u will discover

    da mystery remain of thee................
     
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    Happy B-day Rich!
    feelin' this original flow
    and the riddle you pose!
     
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