Black Poetry : Mysterious Traveller (Remix)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by abstract219, May 7, 2011.

  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow my mind is spinning but i like poetry that leaves my thinking. so keep on doing that what you do oh so well
     
  3. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    many thanks...coming from you, asimplepoet...it is a compliment worth its weight in gold.

     
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    This was mind blowin and weaved into a spinner love the style and vision
    ya pen flowin wit flair........Traveling
     
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    bumped

    Brother Poet abstract219,

    This piece is on a different...higher plane. The verbiage entwined with the names of musical artists, is intriguing ...which makes the piece offer a tinge of sensuality regardless of subject matter. The subject is displaced, knowing he's been here before in a past or future life. The glow of knowledge lives within him and he is more conscience than he believes most are or can be. Just pure energy. Although, living in the present world amongst the putrid people, things, thoughts and "isms"... he manages to stay plugged in by the one thing that cannot be corrupted...the music he loves. I enjoyed reading this piece.

    "It's ok....Ill just stand out here."

    Please continue to stand outside the bubble, and report back through your wonderful poetry what it is you feel and witness.


    Thanks for sharing. (smile)
     
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    this was fun to read...:)
     
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    Peace beautiful poetic brotha....
    Its been such a loooong time but its still beautiful
    music to my ears to read YOU! TotalView pretty much broke it down and
    I am sooo feeln' you. Beautifully Awesome Scribe!!!!!:love:

    Much Luv & Peace,
    4EVER:heart:
     
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    We get your drift...

    You're fabulous!
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    ^^^^
    try again...
    this time focus on the writing, not the writer.
     
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