Quiet Poetry Lounge : MYSTERIOUS LOVER FROM BEYOND......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by spicybrown, May 25, 2006.

  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let your wisdom guide you,

    put those worries beside you,

    standing amongst confusion, I'm draped in triple darkness,

    overjoyed, my soul adrift, while pausing amidst this love quest,

    come go with me, i'll revive your essence with yet another fresh breath,

    from another realm of reality, I have descended to bring you death,

    death of crushed memories,

    life of sheer ecstacy,

    My omnipresence sending shivers up&down your spine,

    you're looking fine as ever......since last time,

    I told you: "I'll see you next lifetime", and I wasn't lying,

    this time I'll make a vow to treasure you like an uncut diamond,

    This here love rapture takes me back several years,

    when we painted the ivory shores with footprints, forgetting all our fears,

    you barely recognize me, thought I painted your memory so bright,

    hush my love, follow my lead, let's promenade through the night,

    into the twilight, let the stars guide our path,

    resting under heavenly dew sprinkles, wishing we can make it last,

    lift my body, safely into your arms,

    protect me from the rain, protect me from any harm,

    before I vanish, bless me with one last kiss...just one more,

    for my mission is deemed "incomplete", next lifetime I'll settle the score.


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    this tale reminds me of kelis song i think about the story it was on her first album of hers. to me it was beautiful song about her lost love. and how she would love to be with him whereever he is. and this is truly amazing spicy keep up the good work please.
     
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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
    I really like how this was laid out to canvass and how it spoke to me !
    flow on sista spicy
     
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    :thanks: Brother $$RICH$$ and Sister Nevar:spinstar:
     
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    most welcome Spicy
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Spicy..this is a brilliant piece...so eloquent...so vivid...I love the time travelling aspect....very witty, very sharp.

    you are a writer of great depth...i need to see more....
    a very witty write.
     
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    Thx abstract. Appreciate the love shown. I am on a quest to learn more about time travel. For some strange reason, I keep experiencing deja-vu. So, sometimes in order to keep my memory fresh; I write a poem about it.
    :love:
     
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