Black Poetry : Mysterious Eyes

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mysterious Eyes

    Mysterious eyes hypnotizing,
    penetrating my exterior
    straight through to my interior,
    exposing my inner soul.
    Do they have ulterior motives? Could this be
    deleterious? I feel this is serious.
    My disposition changes as intuition
    sends premonitions of proposition
    to bring me into submission.
    My opposition doesn't bring
    admission, which draws even
    more suspicion to their mission.
    Mysterious eyes, what are your
    intentions?

    copyright2000
     
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Hello Cocobutterskyn !!!
    thank you for joining us
    putting your poetry on this page

    please know that you are amongst
    friends and family here ... at home

    looking forward to reading more of your work!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    mysterious in their darkness...

    in these eyes
    there is no deceit
    no need to delete
    these roaming eyes of night
    gazing constantly
    at your light
    waiting
    for the river's flow
    come on coco
    give me mo'

    WELCOME to the playground.

    Onelove.
     
  4. MapleXtract

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    Wow!!!

    What a 'grand'~opening piece, scribe. *Feelin' this one all the way down to my toes* :D :D :D :jumping:
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speaking of Grand

    This was a Grand Welcoming. You've made me feel right at home. Thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME
    TO THE HOUSE OF LOVE / PEACE & RESPECT


    IN MY EYES OF NIGHT
    I AM LOVE OF U THROUGH LIGHT
    I AM THE EYES OF FLIGHT

    I WANT TO DANCE IN YO ROMANCE
    OF ESSENCE AND CARESS U WIT THESE EYES
    FILL YO BEINGS WIT LOVE
    FORTH I HONOR U WIT MY EYES OF NIGHT
    :love: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey I love the

    smell of cocoabudda, and the aroma you left is beautiful to my senses. Welcome :wave:
     
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    Wheeeeeeeeewwwww!!!!!

    Cocoa~~

    this was tight ta def!!!!

    oh my...what mysterious eyes!!!!:rolleyes:

    Welcome to your new home!!!!!!:wave:
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just reminiscing...

    My how the years fly by. My first post on Destees, which is actually the first poem I’d written since my early teens. I can see my maturity.

    Coco:heart:
     
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    I see your growth too, but this piece was far from immature or even juvenile in its form.

    What a grand opening indeed, the cocoa-butter scent still lies thick in the air, mmm.

    What a lovely scent... ;)

    One.

    - Ikoro
     
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