Black Poetry : MYSELF ... REDEFINED

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  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOOKING THROUGH WHAT I THOUGHT WAS A WINDOW
    STARING AT WHAT I THOUGHT WAS LIFE
    WALKING AWAY FROM THE THING I THOUGHT WAS OVER
    SIGHING RELIEF FROM MY PHYSICAL STRIFE

    RELEASING FROM ME, THE PAINS THAT HELD ME CAPTIVE
    FREELY WALKING IN THE PEACE I'VE MISSED
    SINGING SONGS THAT RENEW ME DAILY
    NOT WORRYING ABOUT THOSE WHO KEPT ME PISSED

    JOYOUSLY AWAITING MY CALLING
    NO LONGER HIDING BEHIND MY TEARS
    STEPPING OVER THE STUMBLING BLOCKS
    THAT KEPT ME SECLUDED FOR YEARS

    NOW I'M FREE ... SPEAKING MY MIND
    WALKING BRISKLY ... KEEPING TIME
    BREATHING EASY ... INHALING LIFE
    INSPIRED WRITING ... MYSELF REDEFINED
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^5 to you Sis...that's the way to go, you get props for this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes queen u have redefined yaself well big ups sis....
     
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    :welldone: Nice breakthrough... wb Sis.. reinvent; redefine; rediscover... change is good:spinstar:

    :read:

    :picture:
     
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    *SCREAMING* SISTAH MOCHAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *sigh* you have NO IDEA how GOOD it feels to be reading you still up in dis piece/peace
    LOVIN IT!
    thoroughly :read:
    I can always count on ya poetic skills to represent and keep in tune with the verbalistic representation that is...poetry :bowdown: :read: :D
     
  6. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :uhh: WOW I'M SPEECHLESS ... THANK YOU ALL !!!!

    I'VE BEEN ON AN HIATUS BUT I AM BACK .... SO MUCH HAS HAPPENED, SO MANY CHANGES HAVE TAKEN PLACE AND THIS IS MY COMFORT AREA ... I RELEASE MYSELF AT DESTEE .... THANK YOU FOR OPENING YOUR ARMS AND SHOWING ME LOVE SOME .... :blowkiss: blowkiss: :blowkiss: :blowkiss: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :luvu: :luvu: :luvu:
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    rejoice

    my sista
    i see you don't need my "Pain Killer"

    lol

    i love when people become enlightened on to themselves

    the awakening

    and in your case a redefintion

    peace
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt such a freeing of spirit in this piece. This read like a breath of fresh air, welcome back MsMochaB.
     
  9. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep Redefined and quite Refined. This is poem is exubrant! Come on Out Sista & Show OUT!
     
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