Black Poetry : My Years

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Years
    By Monad.poetress

    My years....my pain
    I all wish to forget
    The years of being cursed
    The years of being hit
    My years of stress
    My love put to the test
    So many years passed by with me being in pain
    Happiness I knew I'd never feel again
    My years of fear
    Too scared to just run
    Too weak to scream to scared to have fun
    My years...my tears
    They were both consuming me
    Time eating at my heart
    My tears telling me to flee
    But minutes turn to hours
    And months turn to years
    Your sanity often visits you....then it disappears
    My years....my time
    All wasted away with pain
    Only downfalls to acknowledge...never any gain
    My years...my tears
    I wish I could change them all
    I wish I could yell for them and they would answer my call
    But my years...
    are gone
    They can't be done again
    All those years with pain as my only friend
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was expressively emoted, you speak very clearly. I know what you're saying here, life may get better, but what to do with all the years, gone. The most I can say is learn from it, and discover the good that did happen in that time however slight. Peace.
     
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    lifes lessons come in many forms feeling this drop like watz said i can understand what you said and it is very clear
    flow on:wave:
     
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    word up nice and clear felt ya on this
     
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