Black Poetry : MY WRITTING

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My writting is a cascade
    of tomorrow from today's
    dreamth forth sought
    for the hope of everlasting

    I pose the cript of scribe
    to a verse a note and
    bring forth life inside the
    written wordz of the
    mighty pen and in thou
    greatfulness of bare child
    my unselfish life live
    and the noble work i've
    written is grace'd so their
    children and children ,children
    be blessed

    my table of hope lay
    and the seat of my beings
    sit where my heart remain
    where my soul roam
    and the spirit seeks
    they will know the hand
    of their own from mines

    each line pose a life
    a song , a beat
    it sho da sorrow
    the pain and happiness
    i speaks in herm
    i tells a tale of tyme
    it sho the purest love
    bring warmth & hope
    it touch compassionately
    my fingers is the handz
    of written wordz
    i am that poet .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes you are the poet...
    your sweet
    let it be know this man right
    here is thee
    poet....lol just a little fun...
    i enjoyed the read it was tight and all so true...
    kisses
     
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    yes very true my king...:bowdown:
    and a STRONG souled poet are you :)
    may the waters of your wisdom never cease to flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz blkangel............ya too kind enjoy ya too u support all my
    thoughts and flowz i'm greatful

    triniti.....u ya heart too kind to me u been like dat
    so long i'm greatful to ya
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    This is very nice, and poised, Love ya work always!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u it's poet's like u dat makes my day smooth
     
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    what u grateful foR???!!! LoL Grateful for me lovin my Richne$$ as he is??? come come now my brotha...thank ya self :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes u i am greatful to u give me love & support
    and care in all
     
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    Yes.. I see your work has moved many. Your work has crossed time. Your " VERSES " carrying hope , love and rhyme. From the pen in your hands thru the body to your mind. Keeping writing these lines.
     
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    your writing is one of the most beautiful ways of expression i have ever read. thanks for blessing us with this one. it was truely lovely.
     
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