Black Poetry : My World

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Sep 14, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need to go to tranquility
    Where the sky is blue
    Baby blue
    Stretches forever
    The sun beats gold across
    Lush green earth
    And my olive skin
    Flat land with green grass
    That never end
    Grass never dies
    Sun never stops shining
    Even when silver rain
    Escapes white clouds
    All day, never stops shining
    Until my pasty moon
    Feels the midnight blue
    And moon light just as bright
    Feels my world
    Where I am silent
    And I never talk
    I never need to
    I speak to you with my eyes
    So brown and piercing
    Red lips are for kissing
    Brown eyes are for talking
    Listening
    Seeing
    I can keep an eye on my world
    From the hill top
    Like a queen
    On a throne
    I am a rose
    On a hill
    A lilac rose
    Ground is soft under my beautiful feet
    Grass is soft and cushions me
    Like a pillow
    This is my bed
    The earth is my bed
    I lay my head on soft ground
    Stetch my arms toward
    My sky
    Smile
    Relax
    Breathe
    Close my eyes
    I am through talking.
     
  2. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    This is beautiful, just as you are!! keep it comin Sis!
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much suddenpassion. lot's of love
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this is so so beautiful..tight...
    really movin is what i am looking for...
    i like this one alot.....go girl...
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you mzblkangel...i'm glad it moved you. thank you.
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What serenity you paint in this piece....I love it!

    Very nice true love, very nice indeed!
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful love this...God Bless
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true, this is absolutely beautiful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a very sweet lovely flow
    very beautiful keep it flowin'
     
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    Oh my GOSH...

    Yea baby girl.. you slammed on this one.

    Even when silver rain
    Escapes white clouds

    Calling love up to heaven.

    Spreading like the rainbow color.

    Of your sprit deep.

    Glistening lakes run through your heart.

    Quenching earth when you speak.
    Your in a pace no need for words.

    I can hear you thru the wind.

    Calming My LOVe..

    You're laying there in this tranquil place.

    Quietly waiting for me to come.

    Complete the inner space.

    Come on..

    Come quick..

    Passion hurting.
    Beating cold flow into my mind.

    My blood must increase the heat.
    Unless I get your kiss.

    Then I could survive anything.

    Coming at me now.

    I'm healed cause love.

    Touched me

    I knew it lived.

    In time .

    In you.

    Somehow. :love:
     
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