Black Poetry : My World

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 6, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U wanna hear sumthin poetic, well take a bite of this
    Realer than reality and deeper than a dish
    Complicated, over calculated, often hated, cuz the knowledge I hold is never too heavy 4 my wrist
    Gift given, life driven, characteristics hidden- thats just the way I've been distinguished

    Expected to succeed, anything less would be uncivilized
    Collect my words and eat them cuz one taste of this will leave you mesmorized
    A note for the haters- don't concentrate on me, live ur lives
    Cuz they're the same ones who don't like you but got all ur outfits memorized

    I'm only spittin the truth, my thoughts are purer than water
    I create rhymes and God created a monster

    Competition is nada, I'm not afraid to admit it
    This is the mindset I step with, please don't get it twisted
    I speak with a purpose, always verbally committed
    G'bye, nice to have u at my world, please come back and visit!
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice...very nice.

    You have a great gift of flow. I love it.

    :thanks: for sharing...:D

    :toast:
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like this...very nice...
     
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    All I can say is Amen I am really feeling this, and know where you are coming from ignorance is always intimadated by knowledge, and truth shall never be silence by the masters of scholars. Preach I love this and continue to teach.
     
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    nice flow.......i like i like......much love :)
     
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    a dime piece as usual. keep flowin
     
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