Black Poetry : My Wordz

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do my wordz even mean nethin nemore, or do they go in n out like a pulse.

    u doubt my love, n i dont know y.but i do have no reason 2 lie.i do love u.

    ur 2nd guessin my emotions, which is causin commotion. u should know n feel that i love u w/every notion.

    i guess im causin commotion on myself, but hey wait, ur the 1 who thought of leavin me 2. so now that im already sad n blue, what color would u like me 2 b, so u can see how u changed me.

    do my wordz even phase u or amaze u at least....cuz i coulda sworn these wordz came from u...."i love u"

    oh wait, i know whats wrong, im dreamin, so these r only thoughts.

    but hey, just the other day i said "i love u" n where did it get us...

    my wordz r true, like ill always b 2 u.so tell me, do they still mean nething 2 u???
     
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    a bond of two should always be
    ya wordz one should feel
    it da heart is truely real
     
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    thanx $$Rich$$.......... :)
     
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    most welcome ......
     
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    sometimes words mean nada
    if the other person is not trying harder
    to listen
    so they will be
    steadily missing
    the point at hand
    love is something no one can demand
    and it takes two to truely understand
    if two hearts as one is the plan
    peace
    khasm
     
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    words are sometimes only as good as the action behind... nothing worse then when u know that the person u've always been confident knew how u felt, starts to second guessing u..

    deep piece..

    lo'
     
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