Black Poetry : My words......

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My words are
    not as harsh/hard as yours..
    But I can intertwine in a soulful
    Word play….
    Come deep before I go raw….
    Word words, rearrange
    Stack them…and make them profound..
    Come taste my soul play….
    My style is my own..
    Its whatever….
    bounce here bounce there…
    you cant bare….
    My pen is my guide….
    So I just glide…
    slide smooth….
    Come taste my soul play….
    Mental play tease of da mind…
    Its not a style…
    Just my poetic justice
    In which I exhale
    And hold….
    Come taste my soul play…
    I make it real have ya lust,,
    Twist ya mind…babblin like a fool…
    Use short words…no metaphors….
    Just plain real….give ya dat thrill
    Hurt ya with a chill…
    take a pill…
    Release da pain…
    So it wont stain…
    Or strain ya brain…
    Don’t claim ta be bad with da pen…
    But I am one of da best…
    I write rhymes….
    Dat intertwine and shine…
    Like I said my poetic justice..
    I come from above with
    Da true love…of Writing
    Come taste my soul play….
    bling bling....
    da next one is da thing...
    stay tune.....:kiss:

    blkangel have fun....
    do her thang.....:toast:
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got a taste, now I want the main course.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...thanks fo da read...lol
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unique...i like...
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Serving up some Soul Play.. nothing comes closer to the truth.

    I like this...
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely..thanks glad u like

    hodee..thanks fo da read..glad ya enjoyed
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was tasteful had me in a feast of treats
    i will be back to play inside dis meal of goodies
    yummy
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanks rich fo da read...
    u be sho ta come back now ya hear....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olakuoto..thanks fo da read
     
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