Black Poetry : ~My Words:Part 10~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Words: Part 10
    A Mournful Acceptance

    My last poem...

    my words brought comfort
    my soul desperately
    needed...no longer am i a
    fiend for it...because my pain has
    painfully been defeated...by
    mournfully accepting
    my past...
    it's been holdin me back for
    too long...
    it's time to become familiar and continue
    on with a path that started 19
    years ago...
    i'm in search for my
    abandon destiny...
    and within it's depths i hope to
    find me...
    among the endless
    boundaries...
    and a the miles
    start to add...
    inevitability, i shall grow from
    boy to man...
    until then...
    i'm still lost with alot
    of questions...
    answered only by
    different opinions...how dare do i
    search for truth through
    deceitful men... though it's hard to tell who
    is which...
    and through search and understandin
    friendships end...
    but they say it's never to late to
    make amends...with a fellow
    lonely poet...
    to sit together at a table of harmony
    and trade poetic stories of the places
    we both went...(In search of???)
    together once
    again...the imagery, you can only
    taste it...

    there's not a feel
    of pain...because of this,
    sadly me and poetry shall
    spit ways...
    for she is no longer
    a helpful cure...
    no longer my
    allure...
    i wrote to ease the pain
    there's none anymore...
    truly, she's yours...

    A Keystyle Dedicated To Jana Wilson

    ~December 2, 1967
    November 14, 2001~

    I forgive you...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin u deeply here
    ya words express it all
    flow on
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed..feel this flow..
    much love..
     
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    Wonderfully beautiful.

    Keep writing, it gives piece/peace of mind.
     
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    feelin the flow... nice job...
     
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    i feel the release
    i hope to read more
    i like how you vibe
    i enjoy how you flow
    your words that are scribe
    are deep and direct
    let it roll
    let it pour
    Peace
     
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    oh Mind~$oul...:( I hope you find that peace of mind you seek. :grouphug:

    but this piece/peace itself is a testimony of your powerful poetic proficiency...please dont say you are really giving up on poetry...because obviously it is a part of you...unless that is your intention...peace to you young brotha
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tragic when your muse leaves. but through tragedy poetry heals. can feel your pain, write through it.
     
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    This is real good piece hea bro...like trin sed....hope u aint quittin....cuz itll always be in u......

    i really liked tha imagery in this...i felt ya words soul deep....

    keep postin' man...dont let it all go....


    onelove mindsoul.......
     
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    this is intense - you expressed this pain so well. much love to you.
     
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