Black Poetry : My words lay across

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My words lay across
    The canvas invisible
    To the eye…..
    Cant feel the touch
    Cant hear the cry….
    Night shadows follow
    as they call from the skies..
    scars lay deep peeling
    the soul raw…
    never knowing the damage
    until it happens to you….
    My words lay across the canvas
    Invisible to the eye….
    Twistin
    Flyin
    spinnin
    Tryin to find a level
    ground to land
    dying slowly
    as he plays my harp and knows
    which key to start
    and work it on down….
    Feeding my mental
    Holding my spirit
    My words
    My thoughts
    Hurting inside
    Invisible….just
    hidden away from the world
    A perfect little secret….
    That unfolds as the play go on
    What difference do it make
    Yellow red orange
    The colors don’t shine bright
    For the sight is gone…
    faded….
    No matter
    Cant flow
    Cant sleep
    Cant breath….
    My words lay across
    The canvas invisible
    To the eye…..
    Cant feel the touch
    Cant hear the cry….
    For my tears….
    ………….. runs the ink
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister the emotion in this piece runs deeper...
    than the ink...and it is felt...
    If it's that invisible...sometimes we have to
    reclaim the heart...been there, done that...
    I think I'm feeling this piece too much...

    Emotive scribe...take heart sis...take heart...
    Exceptionally written :spinstar:
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    everytime I read your poetry my face is still like cold metal lol they're grrrrrrrrreat :hot:
     
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    Whoa! Sis, I can't believe how beautiful this is. This is one of your best girl, for real. Wow.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    mzblkangel

    I :crying: because this piece touches my soul
    I :crying: because of broken pieces once whole

    I :crying: because of what my mind once conceived
    I :crying: because of what I truly believed

    I :crying: because this too shall pass
    I :crying: because you will not surrender to sass

    And now I :crying: for your future is so bright
    And, I also :crying: for the joy that will comfort you day and night

    :kiss:
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MBA

    Sis, you've done it again...this was very beautiful :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flowing
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the comments and the lovin support on dis
    scribe
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep sis
    much love to you
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Im diggin that, WOW


     
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