Black Poetry : MY WISH

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They say “Be careful what you wish for
    because you just might get it”
    Although I thought my wish would never come true
    I became a believer because of you
    Yes I had to take my bumps and bruises
    but I would do it all over again
    if means I get to stand beside you
    my luv, my man, my friend

    When it came to relationships for the past 4 years
    I was into jumping ship more than relating
    that’s what a broken heart sometimes do
    I became, selfish, cold hearted, and always guarded
    Living only for me I was not interested in "us" or "we"
    But then came YOU
    Caught me by surprise
    A friendship transformed into a romance right before my eyes

    I often think about the day you asked me
    “Are you ready for me and my luv”
    I have to admit I just thought you were feeding me some ********
    like so many other brothas use to
    I did not give you the credit of being a real true black man
    So I proceeded to live in the life I was acustom to
    Which was all about me not YOU

    Even though you kept excusing my foolishness
    giving me 2nd, 3rd, and 4th chances
    I never once thought that my chances would run out
    I had been having my way until that very day
    the day you took your luv from me and told me
    I was not worthy of you and that if I really luved you
    I would not behave the way I do

    Believe or not I thank God for that day
    because other wise I would still be running away
    from luv and YOU

    I always wished for a man to luv me
    the way YOU do I thought it was so far fetched
    that I never really prepared myself for YOU
    It took me having to lose YOU
    to realize how much I truly luved YOU

    You did something no man has ever done
    just walk away from me
    But I was not fair to you

    I get your point now; I’ve felt your pain
    I’ve cried a river and punished myself
    for what I did to us over and over
    I am not too proud to say it
    YOU are that one My love My King My Everything
    that took me out of my element rattled my confidence
    and made me sercum to YOU

    Now that I have been yet another chance
    I want to ask you “Are you ready for me and my luv “
    Cuz baby, Im gonna bring it with everything I got to you
    I know you don’t have to travel to another state
    to find a mate and I am truly thankful
    that you did not give up on me

    Now I get to show you that I am worthy
    of the beautiful luv YOU have continuously given me
    I know the distance between us is long
    and your job keeps you gone but I don’t never feel alone
    because your luv is locked tight inside me heart

    And every time you jump on that last minute flight
    To spend several hours or several nites
    I feel so lucky that YOU luv me

    I know I tell you every day
    but I just wanted to say
    that I luv YOU so much and thank YOU
    for making my wish come true
     
  2. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's ashame how not-so-good men who never learned how to treat a woman right cause headache and heartache for good-men who did. Because we women build walls around our wounded hearts and can may it impossible to penetrate with genuine love. Some of us lose that special person. I'm sure not only women can relate to this, but men as well.


    Good write


    SmoovV
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome piece of layed out art Poet...
    Know that it was YOU and only YOU, that made your wish come true, ..by the awakening of REALITY..and removal of past baggage.
    Love, don't walk out on Love...it's just set free, to return on it's own will.
    I like your style, I like your flair.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful write sistah,beautiful:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    compassionate indeed i know what u mean .
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smoov:
    Your words are so true. Thank you so much
    for the luv and visit.


    queen:
    Once again you get my wheel turning in my head.
    But you are right. I finally let go of my baggage.
    And I am really glad it did. Thank you for the visit
    and those sweet words of kindness.


    cursed heart:
    Hey my sista, nice to see you checkn' out my flo.
    Thank so much for the luv and visit.


    $$RICH$$:
    Welcome back you....I missed your presence
    and your luv so much. Thank you for feeln' my flo.
    And don't stay gone so long.:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome indeed , i never knew i could be missed .
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh come on now. It was not the same without you.
     
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    i'm humbled thank u
    now enjoy that wish ......smile
     
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    Very Nice

    Nice flow ... and yes .. be very careful for what you wish for cause you WILL GET IT !!!
     
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