Black Poetry : my wild side

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  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    within me it lies,
    rugged and raw
    nappy and chapped
    but beautiful in every sense of the word;
    chanied to the base of an oak that no more grows
    hidden agendas, of which no one else knows
    this form is filled with rage and hate
    mad at the male species because it predetermined her fate
    claiming her inferior,
    but a goddes in her true form
    dormant in her activities, delicate in the norm
    beating on the inside of my chest cavity with a vengence
    hoping to come from inside to the outside with independence
    pushing thru the depths of my soul
    emerging thru the cavities between the folds
    with a burning desire to escape from a bottomless pit,
    a canyon of horrible odors and feelings distracted by scents
    and still pushing forward
    with dreams of hope to break out of the desolate home that bears no fruit,
    but struggles to breathe thru the skin that's covered in a suit.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done hi-wa

    welcome within as u flow ya poetic show
    welcome to destee's place where u face
    many happy ways to play in da playground
    may i add well done poet.....
    :toast: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    deep flow ... luv'n it

    thank you for joining us
    friends and family up in here
    please make yourself at home
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im definitely

    Diggin ya style! Welcome!

    Lookin fa mo'
    Reas
     
  5. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pree-shate it

    thanx for da luv from all yall.
    pree-shate yall takin the time.
    keep readin.
    peace
     
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