Quiet Poetry Lounge : MY WIFE...IS MY LIFE...FOR LIFE !!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Apr 8, 2004.

  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    FIRST AND FORMOST I WANT TO EXPRESS THAT MY WIFE IS MY OTHER HALF..MY BACKBONE...MY QUEEN...AND THE VERY AIR I BREATH. I POSTED A POEM CALLED 'IF NUBIA WERE MINES' AND MY WIFE INFORMED ME THAT THERE ARE JUST SOME THINGS 'MARRIED' PEOPLE DON'T DO OR SAY, SIMPLY OUT OF RESPECT.

    WITHOUT A SECOND THOUGHT, I TOTALLY AGREEDED. MY WIFE IS WITHOUT QUESTION...A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN, MOTHER, WIFE AND QUEEN. I WOULD RATHER STOP BREATHING BEFORE I CAUSE DISHARMONY IN MY HOME OR MY WIFE'S HEART, TO MAKE A LONG STORY SHORT...I DELETED THE POEM. SOME HAVE READ IT AND RESPONDED WHICH IS WHY I FELT THE NEED TO EXPLAIN WHY IT WASN'T THERE.

    I'M SURE THAT EVERYONE ON THIS FORUM ARE AWARE THAT EVERY LOVE POEM THAT I WRITE IS ABOUT MY WIFE, SO I DID FEEL THE NEED TO REMOVE THE ONE I POSTED EARLIER AND REPLACE IT WITH:

    YOU ARE MY QUEEN FOR LIFE...

    IT'S YOU WHO I KISS AT THE DARN OF EACH DAY...
    AND IT'S YOU WHO GETS MY WHOLE WEEK'S PAY.
    DISRESPECT HAS NEVER BEEN MY GAME.
    REMEMBER IT'S YOU...I GAVE MY NAME.
    REMEMBER IT'S YOU ...WHO HOLDS THE AIR THAT I BREATH
    AND TSWANA KNOW THIS...YOU'RE ALL THAT I NEED

    MY UNDYING LOVE...KEITA :flirt:
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this makes me want to get married lol very nice :hot: :hot:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love dis here got me looking for a wife
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this is so sweet
    so specail
    much love on this flow from your heart:heart:
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why he always be getting the Hammer? This man is sincere!!!!!!
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aweeeeee!!!!


    *grabbin a tissue*....
    Keita, I pray God continues to bless you and your beautiful family.
    This was beautiful.
    I pray that I find a king as beautiful as you brutha :heart:
    Nita
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, that's what love is about, give and take, caring about the other's feelings. This was beautiful to read, Black love, there's nothing like it.
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful dedication to your wife!!
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww.this is beautiful....i'm sure she appreciate's it....
    :heart:
    -story
     
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