Black Poetry : My Want - My Need

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Mar 12, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shall I loudly ask for nothing
    and quietly receive everything
    as I want and need of you?

    Needing extends far beyond
    wanting but both are a necessity
    of loving in truth and surely
    with depth

    I want to kiss you as we wake
    in the morning light;

    I need to feel your lips pressed
    against my own at every moonlit
    night when romance overtakes me

    I want to hold your soft body
    closely in my arms on those most
    memorable occasions;

    I need to embrace the warmth of
    you that comforts me always at
    all times just because

    I want to make love to your womanhood
    until you call out my name in pleasured
    moans of undeniable passion;

    I need to make love to your mental so
    your body and soul can cry out for my
    love in a rhythmic love accord

    I want to love you as often as you allow
    me to have your sacred love;

    I need to love you any time my heart yearns
    simply for the sustainment of me

    My purposeful desire to love is very much satisfied
    by wanting and needing you…

    ©GQINC2K2​
     
  2. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooo Weeee, GQ!

    Sounds like... well nevermind what it sounds like. You got a good one here. Like it a lot. Makes me feel warm all over.

    :heart:
     
  3. Reason

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    ****

    Ya flow is killin' em Q!!! Keep em' comin bruh!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    I am lovin this. Very Very nice
     
  5. mizdee2002

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    GQ,

    wants & needs...i likes it!!!!!!!!!!

    keep doin' yo thang,
    dee
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Big-Head.


    can i just say that you are like... the love master
    & ****?? oops! just said it!! :D i'm diggin' this DW!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Big Bro! This was beautiful! Simply beautiful! (and a lil arousing in an innocent sort of way) ;)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nicely flowed.
    I love the way you
    laid the order of
    importance between
    want and need.

    Scribe On Poet!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these are some strong words, heah!
    want and need...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i need to say not one word u know dis da bomb!!
    i want and i need more of dis bring it on!!!!! Q
     
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