Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Visions

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Wordacist, Jun 4, 2004.

  1. Wordacist

    Wordacist New Member MEMBER

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    My Visions

    i can't believe
    this has finally happened to me,
    someone like you...
    this one is for you,
    my queen, the new lady in my life...
    music to my ears...motivation for my tears...you are
    a promising future i see...
    i sometimes wonder what took so long
    to find which seems to be my perfect match...maybe my soulmate
    so much in common...the thoughts and ideas we share....
    i look forward to holding hands, walking down the park
    as i stare in your eyes...
    day dreaming about us...you and me,
    our promising future
    your smile paralyzes me everytime i glance your way
    my brownskin seems to blush with every word you say
    i always said there was something about you..that takes me to a different place
    its you...from the top to the bottom...
    i enjoy your mind...and the journey you take me on...
    with every thought you make...i take a little more and more knowledge to create
    a better understanding..of what and whom seems to be unclear...to me.
    i see the support you will bring...standing by me with every decision i make...
    for the nights after the long days...i see you making sure i can take
    all that is served on my white-collar plate...
    i have visions of later in our lives....multiplying and adding...to our joyous situation
    and in conclusion...
    as we embark on this journey...as partners...together,
    i know we will make it...and last...forever.
    (5/31/04)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    expressing da heart of love
    to da Queen u hold so dear
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was expressed so sweetly, someone sounds very lucky to be viewed in this way.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if this peace does not give the feeling of

    ~~~Falling~~~ and being totally enwrapped in love

    I don't know what does...wow

    This was so captivating...I loved it...

    Thanks so much for sharing this with us!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What man/woman wouldn't want to hear something that clings dear to their heart...as these words of love do. Your other half must be feeling pretty good right about now. nice write...keep pushing the pen.
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm on my way.......Congrats....I thought it would have been me...Continue to feel...and never stop putting it down on paper...very well done...


    :love: "Love is" a beautiful thing" :love:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes
    the flower of love
    is growing a beautiful garden
    very lovely flow from heart
    much love
    flow on
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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