Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Visional Eyes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Eisha, Nov 30, 2003.

  1. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I close my eyes and what do I see?
    Everything that is new to me.
    I changed a lot at least that's what I think,
    Its like I can't see it, maybe its a missing link.
    Everything I am suppose to be I'm not,
    Like a cherry that is sour to rot.
    I'm not free to make my own choices at least thats what I say,
    Make-up excuses in any way.

    I close my eyes and what do I see?
    Everything that is new to me.
    I felt as though I changed a lot through the years,
    Fought many battles that sacrificed my faith and my tears.
    My heart never ached so bad,
    One of my side-effects causes me to be sad.
    Whenever I cry now, tears don't come out,
    I don't know what all of that is about.
    The change of myself I do not like,
    Changed to someone I feared my entire life.
    This maybe a letter to God for frogiveness,
    Please forgive me for my unhappiness.
    I wish to become happy soon,
    Let my eyes glisten up again like the reflection of the full moon.
    Make a smile that can brighten a whole room,
    If I don't change now, I will be doomed.
     
  2. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace..

    Nice flow, I felt this......
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow....feelin ya vibe
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u pose was like a sweet rose
    love the flow and ya heart of gold
    very very nicely done poetess one ...
     
  5. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for all the love.
     
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    ah my little ones
    this is very touching
    please do flow more
    have fun
    let it roll
    Peace
     
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