Black Poetry : My Very First Time...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, May 8, 2003.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was young and inexperienced
    never before had I done this
    oh yeah sure i played around a little bit
    but never truly crossed over that threshold
    until you took my hand
    and showed me how to flow
    you grabbed my pen
    and allowed its essence to create
    with every stroke
    you taught me how to bring words to life
    assured that on this night
    I was going to be a real man
    as you worked your craft upon me
    and baptized me in your flow
    invoking passions that I had never before experienced
    drawing from me what I longed to release
    since the first time I ever encountered you
    you took what I had to give like I was special
    you told me to keep it going and begged me not to stop
    and just when if felt as if I was about to explode
    under the stress
    a new burst of energy coursed through my veins
    as I was endowed to be the one
    to become one with Poetry herself
    the Son and Agent of Love
    whose mission is to spread Love
    in all of its forms and fashions
    and to this very day
    I overlook the Sea called Love
    guiding lovers to the peaceful shores
    of the most powerful force that mankind can ever experience
    The Power of True Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all up in it tyteeeeee
    as hell as the flow
    cast a spell
    sending me spining
    fast as light
    poetic sweet love
    took me in flyte
    to share my love
    a true gift from above
    as my pen glide
    in my royal kingdom
    i scribe .........................Thankz Bishop i needed dis here
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Love It Bishop...You Know I Do...You Know I Do!

    It's good to read from you again...I've missed those poetic ballads from you. Ever thought about a book??? It ain a hard thang to do. I pretty sure us women folk will read it until the last string breaks.
     
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    the first time you always remember...tyte bruh
    nice to see you back on the scene...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    indeed Bishop bring da best out of us all
    when he drop like dis here
    i remember so well
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful
     
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    indeed bishop i'm lovin dis big tymeeeeeeeeee to da top we go
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was cool. I like how you addressed
    poetry in the first person like a first love.
    Peace, poet.
     
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    Clapping and snapping for you!

    What a delicious entree into the world we call Poetry...
    What a blessing it is to be in the prescence of so many who
    "STAY TRUE TO THE GAME!"
    SPREAD LOVE AND GET SOME...:D
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!

    p.s Thanks for everything ! I truly admire your gifts my brotha like no otha, often imitated but never recreated:D :D :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
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    AND A WONDERFUL LOVE IT IS! thanks for the energy that exploded inside ya.
     
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