Quiet Poetry Lounge : My verbal tower like a terrible power rappers feeding me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, May 1, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My verbal tower like a terrible power rappers feeding me
    Chapters of hood trash can’t get a good grasp on life you see
    Go to the library and see Mariah Carrey body on magazines
    And wanna touch it, “yeah dawg the girl is fine body all cream
    At a party seen with Swiss Beat she kiss sweet got stamina with
    A camera taking a pictures and making scriptures grammar a gift”
    Some of these kids lids not too tight at midnight should read books
    Some jack off with facts false out of porn books born shook
    On naked phonics their matrixs is ironic end up being a crook
    “So dawg When comes to jive commissioners the lives of prisioners
    Should be spared and this could be aired on TV to all listeners
    Yeah petitioners are dropping truth sick politics is no game”
    Yo how these lames feel now that their game revealed came
    To steal my rhymes gonna have to kneel this time or get tamed
    My national anthem has harden become the phantom of the garden
    Growing Hip Hop crops in garden plots fertilize with miracle grow
    As my lyricals flow through the soils true and loyal the fearful know
    Got my dreads plat now my head phat even a red hat appeals
    To me, whack cats appear in my doorway make me fear meals
    Hardcore everyday “dawg are those beans poision?”
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed how one line built upon another here rhymebad.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin how this pulls me into the next line after line
    keep droppin it hot !
     
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