Black Poetry : My Valentine's Day Thank You

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  1. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Silently Watching as you fuss over me
    Making my lunch, being sure that I had enough to satisfy me
    Sitting at my desk I begin to think about how you always make sure
    That your man never has to worry about a thing
    I appreciate everything you are to me
    So much that this Valentine’s Day will be very special indeed
    Saying I love you, doesn’t suffice, but actions speaks louder than words
    As I drive home, I stop by the travel agent
    Picking up the 2 cruise tickets I ordered
    In just a few days we will be in the Bahamas
    Under the Caribbean sun
    I guess I should tell you about this
    But I won’t, not just yet, not until
    I bless you with the diamond ring you been Watching
    Not until I have bestowed upon you the new Benz S500 Sedan
    Oh yeah, you made my life so rich
    That what I do for you can never compare
    You will never have the feeling of being taken for granted
    Because I love you more than any other
    You was there for me when I was at Death’s door
    And during my most recent illness you never left the hospital bed
    Baby everything I do is for you
    And this Valentine’s Day will just be the beginning of the next phase of our love
    Watch and see
     
  2. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh now this is really nice... lucky woman she is


    am
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gonna have my sista-in-law all smiling and stuff...ain't mad at ya...bring me somethin back from Paradise Island....
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    awww!

    :love:

    tight flow Watcher

    peace

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah!!! boyeeeee!
    Watcher man dis was da bomb
    too sweet
     
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    i agree with amberly.............................
    and sounds like real love
    no ....not sounds it.. is real love
    trough sickness and in health....
    beautifull
     
  7. dnommo

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    i see you have truly scribed my thoughts today..there is nothing greater than showing love everyday...

    Watcher, poet, you have done this one great justice...

    Great scribe...

    one.
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lookatcha now..........



    One
     
  9. GQ

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    Watcher,

    Brilliant V-Day love dawg!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    this one's off the chain!!
     
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